The Dream dies

I don’t want to sound morbid or depressing in this post. Goodness knows these long, cold months of winter with illness and death rife, aren’t the happiest of months anyway. But I need to grieve, not only the passing of a couple of young people at the peak of their lives, or my Aunty Marge, the passing of the last of my parents families but also the passing of a dream. My dream to write a novel.

My book ‘Tarureka’ has now been read by two different people, a professional writer who has written many historical novels and an editor who has cast her experienced eye over my work which now stands at 60,000 words. Sadly, both have reached the same conclusion – it doesn’t work as a novel. A memoir or a history but not a novel.

Both have suggested changes. One that there should be a rape scene with the minister which forces the heroine into an unhappy marriage. The other has stressed that there must be a resolution, a happy ending. Both are impossible. I am trying to write a Christian novel honouring commitment and fidelity. Although my hero and heroine are both married (fairly unhappily) they fall in love with each other. But unlike so many current novels they don’t gratify their desires and have an affair but instead choose the path of commitment, commitment to their partners, in one case, an invalid wife, and in the other, a large family also. The ending will not write itself as happy. I have tried but it doesn’t work. If I make all the changes as instructed I would be writing an entirely different book. But this isn’t the book I chose to write. Far better to put it away and let the dream die. After all, I have my articles and have been successful with them. For now I must move on and commit myself to the future and not look back like Lot’s wife (Gen 19 v 26) and become a pillar of salt. Please God don’t let my writing fossilise like that but grow the little I have. Amen.

About journojohnson

I qualified as a journalist in 2002 and after a period working as a freelance for Gloucester Media writing advertorials, interviews, articles and press releases I have gone on to write for lots of magazines and newspapers, both local and national. I write regularly for the Writers and Readers magazine but have also written for CPO's Inspire, the New Writer, Classic Ford, and Take a Break's My Favourite Recipes among many others. I published my first full-length historical novel. Waireka in 2018 and my romantic novella, Alpha Male in 2016. Both can be found on Amazon. Please follow the links on my book page.
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2 Responses to The Dream dies

  1. Anonymous says:

    Sounds a little like a modern day 'Brief Encounter'. Would have thought there was plenty of marketspace for such a story these days. Big hits come from being different. As the norm of this age would follow the infidelity route a story of resisting gratification would be unusual. Despite our present day culture and associated relationship weaknesses, I believe most people would easily emphasise with this couple. Could be a big hit!


  2. Thank you so much, anonymous. You are a great encourager. We need more like you, I certainly do. Why don't you follow my blog? I'd love you to.


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